4EH Celebrates the Completion of Persuasive Essays

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Please enjoy these very persuasive essays written by the essayists in 4EH.  Our class worked diligently on these for several weeks.  We are very passionate about our ideas!

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  1. Dear 4EH
    I liked your essays. There are some very persuasive ideas. I liked how many of you incorporated survey results into your essays-who can argue with that?
    After reading your essays, I am glad that I have a pet, however I am wondering if I should trade my cat in for a dog? I am so thankful for our library so that our students can read, as I realize I can gain so much knowledge and it certainly is enjoyable. From reading your essays I am now convinced that I would like to visit Taipei-maybe I’ll get a book out about Taipei during lunchtime rather than going to the cafeteria to eat!
    Maybe we should ban homework and take longer holidays, however I am wondering how much learning we would get done! On the other hand, maybe we should get an SAS uniform-it would certainly save time in my house in the morning! We could use that time to complete any unfinished homework.
    I am thinking of taking on a new sport, however I can’t decide between soccer, basketball, or swimming. What I do know is that when I am playing my sport, I’ll be sure to wear Nike, because it is the best!
    And finally, I agree that friendships are so important, and having siblings are great. Hey, maybe siblings can be friends!
    Thanks for your essays 4EH. They left me doing what a good piece of writing does…making me think and grow my ideas, and have opinions about what I read.
    Well done
    Malin’s Mum

  2. Thank you for your kind compliments Malin’s Mum. Maybe you will inspire other Mums and Dads to read the amazing writing of 4EH and to show interest and support for aspiring young authors!

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