My Original Poem


Should I listen?

Should I listen if you’re the one who caused me scarring pain?

Should I listen to your problems?

Should I listen to your tortured mind?

Should I listen to your broken heart?

Should I even listen to the words that leave your mouth?

Should I listen to your weeping soul, if you’re the one who caused me sorrow?

Should I listen to your tears, if you caused my misery?

Will I listen to your depression, if you caused me to be depressed?

Will you listen?

Will you look into my fiery eyes, and stop with the trash that flows out of your mouth?

Will you look into my raging heart, and see the pain you have caused me?

Will you look into my infuriated mind?

Which made it stream with pain?

Do you think that the garbage that rains from your mouth helps you?

My angry, raging, furious, infuriated mind is about to burst into a big destruction.

The depths of my despair will only hurt you, but me even more.

Will you stop?

Is your heart just an empty void, that hasn’t been created yet?

Is your brain an empty thoughtless tunnel?

is your spirit as dark as space without a star in sight?

Will you change your mindset for others to serve?

Will you change your heart so someone won’t think the words that come out of your mouth are true?

Will you just change?

Reflection/Analysis On My Poem

+ Describe how you came up with this topic for a poem.

+ Identify and explain examples of literary devices that you used in your poem, e.g, simile, metaphor, personification, alliteration, hyperbole, rhythm, rhyme.

+ Also, describe the tone (attitude) that you as the writer convey in your poem. Refer to particular words and/or phrases in the poem as evidence that creates that tone.

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Book Review + Reflection

Reflection on Doing the Book Review

* How did you choose this particular book to review?

* What was it like doing the draft work on your review? (e.g., feedback, editing)

* What did you learn about doing book reviews? (e.g., the balance between summarizing and stating your opinion – without referring to yourself – the use of reading terms).

Introduction to My Book Review

     Ever watch commercials on TV and notice how many are related to eating food? How does a young teen deal with living in a society that is so based on eating? The topic of eating disorders may not be your cup of tea, but for some readers, with the right guidance, this realistic fiction novel, The Best Little Girl in the World by Sam Levenkron, could be some help. The main character, Kessa has a serious eating disorder called anorexia nervosa, but she is not alone. Many people have this eating disorder, and this book shows its harmful effects. This is an emotional and inspiring story of a determined girl and her fight to survive; however, it does have its flaws.

You can read all of my book review by clicking: here.

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Three Books That Define Me As A Reader

I probably first read this novel in Grade 5, but it was still one of my favorites into middle school. It is a story of a 12-year-old boy who runs away from his family’s crowded apartment in New York City so that he could try to live in a forest. In its own way, the story made me think of life as an adventure.

I can remember being in a Grade 7 play based on the Mark Twain novel The Adventures of Tom Sawyer, but I liked this novel by the same author even more because it seemed to go deeper into the idea of freedom – for Huck, a boy without family roots, and his adult friend Jim, a runaway slave. I learned a lot about racism in society as well as enjoying the adventures that Huck and Jim had together.

I’m not sure if this is the same cover of the biography that I read in Grade 5. I did like to read lots of biographies, mainly about sports stars such as Boston’s star hitter, Ted Williams, but also players such as this Brooklyn Dodger shortstop named Pee Wee Reese. Maybe I remember reading about him because of his catchy nickname but also because I later learned about the friendship this white player from the southern part of the U.S. had with Jackie Robinson, the first black player in major league baseball. I could see it was ‘more than just a game.’

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Three Things About Me

#1: Yes, I am a Boston Celtics basketball fan. When I was growing up, the Celtics won 11 out of 13 NBA championships! The team name also connects with my Irish ancestry. The 3-leaf clover, also called a shamrock, is a symbol of the Irish and good luck. Hopefully, with some luck that they make, the Celtics will soon win championship number 18!

#2: The beach, any clean and not-too-crowded beach is where I feel relaxed and energized, especially if there are good waves for body surfing. The photo above is from one of my favorite beaches on Cape Cod in my home state of Massachusetts. (This beach is where I proposed to my wife!)

glowing-book (1) #3: Reading books – to me, reading is magical in the way that imaginary as well as real stories come alive in my mind and often connect with real life experiences. No matter where I am, I can enter this world of magic!


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